At this point, the writer is considering adding the fol- lowing accurat¢ information: in the waters off Georgia and Florida Should the writer make this addition here? right whales, near-extinction to a specific region of the United States. location of the right whales, winter habitat and summer habitat. the right whales, winter habitat is in Massachu- setts Bay or in Georgia and Florida. ,No, because it provides intormation ihat blurs the essay's focus on describÉDg a me<1ns o'f detecting rigbt whales. the highly industrialized coastline of New England. ACT-7JG GO ON TO THE NEXT PAGE. Because right whales tend to stay closely to the shore 17 and feed on zooplankton near the water's surface,
